Page 4 pencil rough
Here's one more concept drawing, and finally some of the actual comic book. I put up the thumbnails for the first four pages, plus the pencil roughs for pages 1, 3, and 4. Page 2 is particularly important, so I started it later so my drawing of the characters is a little more warmed up. Hoping my sister (who has a lot more experience writing) will help me rewrite the dialogue so it doesn't sound like a caveman wrote it.
Here's one more concept drawing, and finally some of the actual comic book. I put up the thumbnails for the first four pages, plus the pencil roughs for pages 1, 3, and 4. Page 2 is particularly important, so I started it later so my drawing of the characters is a little more warmed up. Hoping my sister (who has a lot more experience writing) will help me rewrite the dialogue so it doesn't sound like a caveman wrote it.